Eyes Only
Published by Sanket Rathod under eyes, love, question, rose on Friday, February 13, 2009As many spare afternoons as they always had
He spent following his most favourite fad.
Talking, sitting closer than fair and necessary,
Seeking an already long acquired treasury
In her eyes.
As she talked and expressively waved,
Each little or loud clink her bangles made
Matching now and then with the ring of her laughter,
He knew he madly tried to keep up and chase after
Her rolling eyes.
He saw her pluck one bye one the rose petals
That he took great care to bring her as he pedalled.
Soon he saw something and smiled an 'It's OK' smile,
The regret of what she'd been doing all the while
In her eyes.
But one afternoon he didn't sit at all any close,
Nor did he let her pluck petals of a daisy or a rose
For he whelmed her with not one but blossoms eleven.
And with just one gesture she answered his question,
Her affirming eyes.
8 comments:
Ah!
Such a nice read :)
So likely Sanket types ;)
Really? Wow!
I was thinking that it was kinda stupid...
Anyway... I now got a grin like that cat on ur pic!
sounds platonic....yet fresh & sanguine! :)
SANGUINE....!!! ^_^
I'll take that! Thanks!
Ah!! A beautiful delight.
I can only dream of the way you write.
Great going Sanket! I wish to see more from you over here. :)
Wow! thanx sunil!
The beauty is revealed in that last stanza.. with the eleven blossoms, which blossom an answer.
I shall take it as an optimistic answer :)
:D
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