Red Horizon
Published by Sanket Rathod under hands, horizon on Tuesday, December 23, 2008She silently watched the horizon turn red
The day satisfactorily coming to an end
His breath played softly caressing her neck
Her hands still lay held in his hands
He silently watched the horizon turn red
The day grudgingly coming to an end
Few loose locks played softly on her neck
His hands still lay held in her hands
They silently watched the horizon now red
The day had to, had come to an end
He held his breath, she closed her eyes
And wished each other to let go today
4 comments:
Mushy mushy :)
Very subtle ;)
:)
I like the way the two perspectives merge into an unspoken meeting of a single perspective:)
Interesting!
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well, I'm glad you liked!
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